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Donna J Hilbert's avatar

Beautifly done. Wonderful ending.

LL's avatar

Really love the catalog technique in this poem. An example of how it can work at its best. :)

Of course, I love this ending, too...

In tandem she sings gems. Her goal:

Sing cold.

Sing tired.

Sing hungry and whole.

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