Sometimes Even the Stars Are Not Enough
The field leans like shoal grass where the back bay
bends ‘round jetties in the shallow flats,
as the wind silvers the leaves, and grasses lay
down their browning blades on autumn mats
of shadows dropped from a clouding sky,
and teatime flowers bow and tip their hats.
The day turns light toward the west as I,
moored in time, watch the world course by and reel
across a page, my hand a stranger to my eye.
Beyond the dunes, birds cry from salt marsh creels
or concealed in palms; waves crash in the earth’s shell―
the holder’s hand and ear unseen―the sun kneels
before the night where yesterday’s stars that fell
from unknown heights were discarded with a page
where emptiness eclipsed what I tried to tell.
—Rick Maxson
Used by permission of Rick Maxson. Photo by Dave Hoefler, Creative Commons, via Unsplash.
I'm happy that my poem initiated a discussion. It does resemble the form of Frost's Stopping By Woods On a Snowy Evening, but I was not intending to emulate Frost. I wrote this years ago when I lived in Florida and would walk my dog every day near Coffee Pot Bayou in Saint Petersburg. The sounds of that day seem to blend together and one sound would lead my attention to another sound and so on. This is one of my favorite poems. I'm happy you liked it.
The sounds in this poem are incredible. I could sit with it for a long time!