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Bethany Rohde's avatar

"We all come from there—"

tspoetry's avatar

Sounds like a wonderful poem starter! :)

Claire Adderholt's avatar

pulses with energy and beauty

tspoetry's avatar

an inspiring line! :)

Sandra Fox Murphy's avatar

This is such a lyrical and lovely poem! "I weave a needle into the gauze of day

and pluck it out again" So many great phriases woven into a song that makes me want to sing.

tspoetry's avatar

We hope you do! Sing :)