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Susanna's avatar

I love this poem. Thank you.

Bethany Rohde's avatar

So many lines to highlight -

"two bumblebees working the same thistle"

Megan Willome's avatar

I've always loved this one.

Everett Taasevigen's avatar

I enjoy this poem very much. “adolescents marching

into the light of their moonrise drums” wonderful imagery. Oh, and the word "sluicing" I enjoyed the sound of that it, and lexicology exercise. Thank you.

tspoetry's avatar

Glad you enjoyed!

The source material that Tania used (Laura Brown's socials) is always so promising on the lexicology side. Laura has a definite way with words!