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I love this poem. Thank you.

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Isn't it wonderful? :)

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So many lines to highlight -

"two bumblebees working the same thistle"

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I've always loved this one.

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I enjoy this poem very much. “adolescents marching

into the light of their moonrise drums” wonderful imagery. Oh, and the word "sluicing" I enjoyed the sound of that it, and lexicology exercise. Thank you.

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Glad you enjoyed!

The source material that Tania used (Laura Brown's socials) is always so promising on the lexicology side. Laura has a definite way with words!

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