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Susanna's avatar

I love this poem. Thank you.

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Bethany R.'s avatar

Isn't it wonderful? :)

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Bethany R.'s avatar

So many lines to highlight -

"two bumblebees working the same thistle"

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Megan Willome's avatar

I've always loved this one.

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Everett Taasevigen's avatar

I enjoy this poem very much. “adolescents marching

into the light of their moonrise drums” wonderful imagery. Oh, and the word "sluicing" I enjoyed the sound of that it, and lexicology exercise. Thank you.

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tspoetry's avatar

Glad you enjoyed!

The source material that Tania used (Laura Brown's socials) is always so promising on the lexicology side. Laura has a definite way with words!

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