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LL's avatar

Really love the catalog technique in this poem. An example of how it can work at its best. :)

Of course, I love this ending, too...

In tandem she sings gems. Her goal:

Sing cold.

Sing tired.

Sing hungry and whole.

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Donna J Hilbert's avatar

Beautifly done. Wonderful ending.

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Robert McDowell's avatar

Excellent! I needed to hear that insistent song this morning! Thank you.

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Katie Brewster's avatar

Golden:)

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Megan Willome's avatar

What a joy to find my little birdie poem here this morning!

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Laura B.'s avatar

I would love to see one! And hear her song. But you paint a vivid picture.

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L. Adams's avatar

Joyous🙌🏼

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